Potential instant messenger breakup I need some advice?

My Boyfriend and I had an argument on the computer recently. Technically he did nothing wrong but he just made me really upset. At one point he typed "we are done". I really LOVE him, and I'm afraid of losing him. At the end of our conversation he said he will talk to me later. I really want to show him that I'm sorry, so I thought typing him an apologetic note would help the situation. Pasted below is what the note read, I have yet to send it to him. I thought first it would be nice to hear what fellow Yahoo! Answer members had to say. I NEED YOU GUYS TO BE HONEST!

I?m truly sorry for what I said yesterday. I?m also sorry if what I said came across as being mean, because that?s not what I felt at all. You came on line so I thought that I would get to talk to you, but when you did not respond I just lost it. I just let my emotions get the best of me; I can only think to put some blame on my post menstrual hormones. I hope you can forgive me. I just wish we could put this whole situation behind us. Which I know is a difficult thing to do, but we have done it before. If I could I would start the whole day over and take back everything I said. I feel extremely bad about what I wrote and it brought me to tears. What more can I say? But that when I type and say ?I love you? I mean it. When I say you are the single best thing in my life I mean it. When I say I miss you right after we just had a date I mean it. When I say I thought about you the whole day I mean it. When I say I?m horny right now thinking about you I mean it. I have been completely honest with you throughout the whole relationship. Technically you did nothing wrong. So looking back on yesterday, you can totally put the blame on me I know I screwed up. I?M SORRY! No one is perfect God knows that for damn sure. I?m not ready for our relationship to end, and I hope you feel the same way. I made a lot of mistakes yesterday. I?m willing to learn from them, and try my hardest and to put more effort towards our relationship. I know I typed a lot and it?s a lot to process. I REALLY JUST WANT YOU TO BE HAPPY. I know that when I?m with you I?m the happiest girl in the world, being with you has made me a better person, and for that I would like to say thank you!

was what you said really that bad? i think it sounds like too much.. if i were you I'd cut out the unnecessary parts and make sure you include only the most important, deepest feelings. otherwise it's just blathering.

it's good that you're being completely honest, but since it's hard to read, he might just see that you are apologizing without getting the real point. if you write it clearly, he will understand your why you're sorry and how he makes you feel.