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Old 01-24-2010, 03:54 PM
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In my story I have a pair of lovers kissing but I don't know how to describe it! Can you give me a example?
It's third person, and from the girls prov.

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Old 01-29-2010, 03:54 PM
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have you ever been kissed?
try to remember what it was like..
describe it from one persons point of view, but if it's in third person describe what they were doing,
how did their lips move?
where were their hands?
how did they feel?
what were they thinking?
describe the movements of their tongues if this is a kiss including them.
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Old 02-01-2010, 03:54 PM
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Well, it helps to have kissed someone to know what it feels like emotionally as well as physically. I'm not gonna write a scene for you, but try to describe the feeling of nervousness and adrenaline and even longing(for emotional), and the feel of the actual kiss! Haha

mine please?
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20110307180300AAD6Op5
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Old 02-04-2010, 03:54 PM
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It's not so much the description of the kiss as it is the build up to that point. It's all in the anticipation, the wait and the wanting of the kiss. Make sure you do it from just one character's POV. It would be best if you read a few books with some kissing scenes to get a general idea. It depends on how sexy or hot you want it or how sweet and innocent.
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Old 02-05-2010, 03:54 PM
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I'm pulling this straight from my own piece of work, and I'm trusting you to not steal it..

Spencer pulled me into him. "I thought you were a goner," he whispered.
I smiled softly and wrapped my arms around him. "I couldn't leave you, not like that."
He pressed his lips to mine, and it started out as a soft kiss that lingered. Then it was like something in me switched. I was kissing him deeply and hugging him close.
My emotions were like fireworks. This is wrong, he's my best friend.
No, this is perfect. This is how it's supposed to be.
Spencer put his hands on my lower back and pressed me closer, I never wanted this to end.

By the way, that's how I ended the story.
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Old 02-09-2010, 03:54 PM
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Use descriptive words!!!
Such as intimate and unable to breathe
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Old 02-13-2010, 03:54 PM
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Is the story told in 1st or 3rd person? If it's in 3rd person, is it from the boy or girl's perspective ?Describe what he/she feels. Is he/she nervous? If yes, show don't tell. You can say 'her heart was beating really fast' if you are trying to show that she is scared or nervous. Is it awkward for either of them? Just describe in full detail and play around with the story until you're satisfied. Don't be scared of making mistakes or starting over!
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Old 02-14-2010, 03:54 PM
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It helps if you've experienced it or not. Are you trying to make the kiss romantic and sweet or short and sloppy? Here's an example and I hope it helps ^ ^:

The hot sun beat down on them, reflecting off the white sand and half blinding Miranda. Ken grabbed her by the hand and sprinted for a clump of palm trees near the cliffs, about ten yards away. The sand was blistering their feet.
Miranda and Ken were both panting once they reached the trees. They fell down together into the powdery sand, wallowing and clutching at each other, laughing like giddy grade-schools.
Once Miranda's eyes had adjusted to the shade, and she could see once again, she propped herself up on one elbow and noticed that Ken had gone quiet and was staring at her. It made her self-conscious, but she was unable to look away once their eyes had met.
Like every other girl in Turtle Cove, Miranda had long admired Ken's surfer boy good looks. His tanned skin and golden-green eyes, the sprinkling of freckles across his nose and sandy blond hair were to die for. But lying this close to him, she couldn't help but notice for the first time just how muscular his shoulders were, and how lush his lips looked. She let her gaze slip lower, to the rest of his body she had seen a thousand times, but which seemed so utterly different today.
What was she doing? Ken was her best friend. No way should she have been noticing how his abs rippled down into the waistband of his swim trunks.
"Wow, when did you get these?" Miranda teased, reaching down to run her hand along his impressive six-pack. But Ken caught her hand in his just before she touched him, startling her.
When she looked into his eyes once again, his expression was intense, almost threatening.
For a moment, Miranda thought maybe he was angry, but before she could ponder it further, he yanked her to him and covered her mouth with his in a hungry kiss. She responded immediately, surprising herself. His mouth was so warm, the caress of his lips softer than she could have imagined. He tasted tentatively with his tongue, and Miranda opened her mouth with a low moan.
Suddenly, Ken pushed away as if he'd been burned. He jumped up off the sand and started pacing back and forth with his hands on his hips.
"I'm sorry, Miranda," he said in a strangled voice. "That wasn't right."
"It's okay," Miranda said, looking at the ground. She was afraid of seeming too eager or disappointed. In fact, she wasn't quite sure how to react, to the kiss or to Ken's sudden show of regret.
"That wasn't right," he said again. "Come on, let's go find the others."
He took Miranda gently by the hand and helped her up, avoiding looking into her eyes. As they made their way deeper into the trees and up the hill, Miranda couldn't help but wonder if Ken's heart was beating as fast as hers, or if he was feeling anything akin to the hot fire of desire that had settled in her belly.

I have to give credit to the source because I didn't come up with it on my own P Heh, good luck
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Old 02-17-2010, 03:54 PM
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Okay, I think a kissing scene is SO easy. I love it!

The battle raged beyond, downed out by our beating hearts. I smelt his sweet masculine breath, linger down my neck and onto my lips. I was eager to kiss him, and I could see in his eyes he felt the same way.
Slowly, his head titled and his soft lips locked into mine. Love was then born. Our bodies drew together, reaching out for each others souls. I wanted it to last forever, but nothing can last forever.. it will soon reach the end.
Not long enough; his embrace softened and he turned away, tearing our lips apart. I saw something in his eyes changed and I knew he would leave me..

Thats ab it out of my story I'm doing. I found this website- And it really helped. It may help you as well. Good luck!
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Old 02-18-2010, 03:54 PM
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With his warm breath on her neck, she shuddered with delight. Slowly, his soft lips met hers...
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Old 02-20-2010, 03:54 PM
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Here it is! I love to write kissing scenes. Especially when they're epic ones. So here's my kissing scene...

My heart was racing when closed he my eyes and lead me to the secret place he always told me about. He finally took his hands away from my eyes and I gasped at the beauty. The moon was shining over the enchanting waterfall he took me to. His dark hair covered his face and I couldn't help but take my hands and pull his hair back. That's when I saw it. Those azure eyes. Just like the ocean, so beautiful and blue. I looked deep into them as he bent down and whispered to me three very important words. I love you. I didn't have time to react, for he quickly captured my lips. It was warm, and his lips were soft. Passion burned within the kiss, desire inti too. Our eyes were closed, both of us savoring the moment. His arms wrapped around my waist and my fingers intertwined with his. Who knows? Maybe fairy tales really do come true.

There we go! Hope this answers your question.

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