Can someone help write a poem to the girl i love to go out with me? Im going to give it to her on vday?

surf3rkid · #1 (**permalink**) 06-29-2010, 07:03 PM

It doesn't matter how long it is. I just would like it to be really sweet and romantic.. Im also a girl. please dint judge me. Im going to ask her to go out with me on valentines day?

iVEE =] · #2 (**permalink**) 07-01-2010, 07:03 PM

I like the twinkle in your eyes, would you fit your hand in mine?

I'm sorry I'm really not in the writing zone right now but that line is the only one I can come up with. I hope it helps you build something off of it. You could always write it in a card.

Good luck!

Rocket Squirrel · #3 (**permalink**) 07-04-2010, 07:03 PM

Just write Wat u feel like.... Wat comes from Ur heart....

Yea Yea · #4 (**permalink**) 07-06-2010, 07:03 PM

Oh OK i got one ha ha

Roses are red, violent are blue,
God made me pretty now what the hell happen to you!!

Lol JFK don't say that unless you want her to slap the skinny back into you!

say...

I love someone yes i do, i love someone how about you, i love someone oh yes its true, so true smiling beautiful CZ its you!

It's not the most romantic but its cute i think