The band Summertime's End writes some REALLY good young love songs
Try lyrics from these three songs (I recommend something out of the last song though):
The Art of Succinct Compliments: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s10X9WrrucE
Lyrics
I know I struggle to find
The way to speak my mind
In twenty five words or less
I never have that success
'Cause sometimes I want to say
All the things that I'm thinking about you baby
It's never seemed to work before
I guess I'll try it just once more
So here I go
You're cute, you're sweet, you're soft, you're smart
You fill the gaps inside my heart
You're nice to hold and hard to leave
You're everything that's good to me
I love your hair, your pretty eyes
The way you leave me mesmerized
I guess there's just one thing that's true
Above the rest - that I love you
I'm sorry if I make no sense
The art of succinct compliments
Has never been a skill of mine
But I'll just do it one more time
'Cause all I really have to do
Is tell you how much I love you
Your Sunrise: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jti4jFBq-y4&feature=related
Lyrics
The sun sets so you pull the curtains closed
But did you see the way your room still glows?
My eyes hurt when I stare at you. It shows
Who's really beaming
It's getting late but it's still this bright inside
Your radiance, it stands to be admired
I'll close my eyes but I promise I'm not tired
I'm just daydreaming
Look in my eyes
You light the skies
Outshine the stars
To their surprise
Make day from night
I'll hold you tight
Your sunrise shining bright
You'll never know how much it means to me
To watch somebody learning to believe
And you can?t see, but behind this UV screen
My heart is warming
I used to hide in darkness all the time
Thought that the best times always passed you by
Until a sunbeam taught me how to shine
By shining for me
Your light, it shines so brightly
I've found someone that's right for me
You're shining right beside me
Keep shining on
In Stereo: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4gnD_V6-GLw
Lyrics
Unspeakable
Like a truth unsaid
The thought of you
Fills my tired head
Your hand in mine
Taking left in right
As we combine
Joining black and white
Turn out the light and we'll dance through the night
Spinning slow
As our hearts beat in stereo
Twirling around in the wake of this beautiful sound
Sway with the breeze in three hundred and sixty degrees
Yeah, our hearts beat for days like these
Soak up the moment and promise you won't let it go
Your breathing slows
As we gently sway
The music stops
But we keep going anyway
The skyline fades
Trading red for blue
But I don't care
'Cause I'm here with you